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    Janelle's mom was hard at work in the kitchen, chopping up various vegetables an what not for dinner she was preparing. She put her knife down an wiped a little bit of sweat from her forehead, than cleaned her hands on her black apron that she wore. Her head turned towards the door as she heard a smacking sound.

"Whats for dinner mom?" Janelle stood in the doorway, smacking her lips an chewing her gum.

"Just making some roast beef an mashed potato's, your favorite." She replied.

"Oooh that does sound good, thats just what the gum you gave me tastes like." Janelle rubbed her belly an looked at her mom. "I thought you said it was blueberry gum though."

Her mom smiled an walked over to Janelle, "Are you sure you cant taste it yet?"

"MMMMM there it is! Wow its so intense!" She started to gulp down mouthfulls of juice.

"Ah thats better, now it tastes like blueberry?" Her mom reached up an put her finger on Janelles blue nose.

"Mhm yes it tastes very much like blueberry, its so juicy!" Janelle rubbed her stomach some more, looking at her moms grin grow wider.

"I cant wait to have my very own giant Janelle berry!" Her mom started to poke at Janelles belly which was starting to bloat under her shirt.

Janelles eyes widened an looked at her mom. "Become your own berry?? What are you talking about??" Her shirt untucked itself as Janelles belly started to inflate, her pants tightened around her fattening legs, she looked down at her new growing body as her mom just stood and giggled.

"Thats it honey, your going to be big and ripe for mommy." Janelles mom smiled an stood back a little to watch her daughters growth. Her belly was getting so big an round that it started to stretch out her shirt till it rolled up under her growing breasts, exposing her deep bellybutton.

"Oh my! Your bellybutton is showing dear." Her mom pushed her finger into Janelles inflating belly, wiggling her fingertip around her daughters navel. Janelles couldnt help but giggle an shake her giant frame, her skin was so tight making her ticklish spot even more sensitive.

"Mom get your finger hehe out of hehe there!! Hehee that tickles!!" Janelles huge body was quivering as she laughed, her breasts were overflowing her tight bra an stretched shirt, making it look like a very small bikini top across her giant blue body, her jeans were having a hard time staying on her round legs an started to pull her zipper down, letting her belly swell outwards even farther.

Janelles mom laughed an pushed her bellybutton again "Hehe look at my giant daughter! She is turning into a wonderful blueberry!" Janelle giggled as her arms stuck out to her sides due to her giant hips an breast, she was becoming one giant blue orb right in front of her mom. Janelle blushed as her shirt tore into two pieces draping off of her swollen arms, her jeans shared a similar fate an tore down the seams, exposing her fat blue lower half.

"Your almost ripe enough to eat!" Her mom laughed, watching Janelles legs an arm sink into her giant blue body, her plump hands an feet wiggled as her moms  fingertip traced around her giant navel, she could feel Janelle filling up to the brim with juice now.

"Ripe enough to eat??" Janelle moaned out of her puffy lips as her neck disappeared into her breast. Her bellybutton bloating out into an outtie with a soft pop. "But mom Im so big an full, I feel like Im going to burst!!"

"Hehe your not going to burst silly, Im just in the mood for some blueberry an your perfect!" Janelles moms eyes sparkled as she watched her daughters body begin to shake an get smaller. Janelle was still blue an round bt she began to shrink down towards the floor.

"Mom whats happening to me?? Im shrinking!!" Her little hands started to flap around as she shrunk tinier an tinier untill she was the size of an actual blueberry, Janelles mom picked her up in her hand an smiled at her shrunken little blueberry daughter.

"Mmmm perfect" Janelles mom popped her blueberry daughter into her mouth an smiled. "Oh an you taste so good!" She giggled an rubbed her belly, not noticing that her nose had a blue spot on it.
i wrote a quick story, just messin around with some ideas, didnt feel like doin a juicing scene either so i went with a really different ending
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:iconstarfallvulpixgirl:
StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
CANIBALLISM! XD
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Harrystylesisallmine Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Hey want to do a roleplay on this surfguy01?
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:iconharrystylesisallmine:
Harrystylesisallmine Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Let's do a roleplay on this please.
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13059 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
where is the originial storie?
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Harrystylesisallmine Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Do you want to do a roleplay on this 13059?
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13059 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
no
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13059 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
Request:You should make a another to continue the story
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13059 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
Request:Maybe you can make a story thru Janelles prespective then including her enter her moms mouth.
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Bloat-Her-Up Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Read some of the comments and I know it's too late, but you should write whatever you want. If you like shrinking and eating then by all means do that. I will admit I didn't care for it, but I really liked the rest of it.
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loginsarelame Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011
love it. love the ending...love the deviousness of it.....keep up the good work..
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squashflat Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
MM would love to talk to you about another story, similar to this, if you do commision stories..
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:iconsurfguy01:
surfguy01 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011
what did you have in mind?
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squashflat Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
sent a message to you.
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Fangobra Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
You, sir, are perplexing. You have the Stephenie Meyer spark. The writing is bad, the plot is simple and short and the idea is done to death.

And yet this is one of the BEST THINGS I HAVE EVER READ. You=awesome.

Instafave.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009
sweet i equal awesomeness!!
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monicasbellybutton Featured By Owner May 24, 2009
AMAZING STORY!
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009
thanks ^_^
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earlmicky Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
nice penny arcade quotes J-42. and I think that this was a good story, up until the eating. the shrinking blueberry bit was an interesting twist though
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wigzor91 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2008
i liked it, and i like when moms and daughters get involved with inflation with eachother. didnt care for the shrinkin part though
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2008
ya ive been getting alot of mixed feelings on the shrinking
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doomsdayking Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
well thats an interesting ending to an interesting story and you chose three of my fave topics vore shrinkage and blueberry inflation well done on this one you are certainly getting better with each story keep them coming
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008
thanks that means a lot, i love shrinking an blueberry inflation
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doomsdayking Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
you're most welcome
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J-42 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008
...good beginning, fair middle...horrible, frightening ending.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
i liked the ending!
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xboxboy939495 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Wasn't a huge fan of the ending myself, but I'll give you props for the creative twist.
I think you can go somewhere with a mother-daughter story with the blueberry inflation...your writing has potential.
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J-42 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
Oh please. You didn't have to go that far. You may not realize that you have made a story where a mother inflates (good), shrinks (meh), and MURDERS (AAAGH!! NO NO!!) her child. It's psychotic.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
hmm i guess when you put it that way... i didnt mean to make it a murder story, next time ill just shrink her an no eating ok?
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J-42 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008
Wonderful. That's all I ask.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008
anything for my readers
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J-42 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008
Great. Thank you so.
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Oakheart12 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008
Nice story.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008
thanks
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Oakheart12 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008
You're welcome.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008
anything you liked in particular? i like to know so i can add more of it in my other stories
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Oakheart12 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008
It's a good story so it's hard to pick one thing out, but I think that the part I particularly liked the most was the part inwhich the daughter became a normal sized blueberry at the end of it. I think that maybe you need to make up different ways of turning your victims into berries (for the chewing gum and the blueberry are practically being done to death). Those are my only points for this story. I look forward to seeing more of your stories later on.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
hmm ya that does get a little played out, thanks for the pointers
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Oakheart12 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008
You're welcome.
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blueberryjanelle Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, that's different. A friend of mine actually had an idea for me to have one of my friend's moms to swell into a blueberry.So I turn into a blueberry, then shrink? That's different. Anyways, very different from what I expected, your getting better.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
thanks! im glad you liked it, you are very inspiring
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blueberryjanelle Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes:
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cjk66 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2008
Very original
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
thanks
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MetallicSonic22 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2008
Yikes, talk about a scary fate for a daughter to go through, but pretty nice story the same.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
thank you the thought of her shrinking into a tiny blueberry just came out of nowhere so i popped it in there
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MetallicSonic22 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
Ah ok then, thought it was kind of a tribute to the Berry Bush story somewhat, but nice plot.
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surfguy01 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
i didnt know of that story? im gonna try to find it an read it
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MetallicSonic22 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
Ok then, well nice job with this one though.
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